Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Sentence Problems - Choppy

Choppy Sentences
3. (a) Government and private agencies have spent billions of dollars advertising the danger of
smoking (b) The number of smokers is still increasing.
- NotEqual
-Main idea?Sentence b
-Relationship: contrast
-Combined sentence: Although Government and private agencies have spent billions of
dollars advertising the dangers of smoking, the number of smokers is still increasing.
4.(a) Some students go to a vocational school to learn a trade. (b) Some students go to college to
earn a degree.
-Equal
-Main idea? both
-Relationship: alternative possibility
- Combined sentence: Some students go to a vocational school to learn a trade, or some students go to college to earn a degree.
5. (a)The grading system at our college should be abolished. (b)The students do not like getting
grades.(c) The instructors do not enjoy giving grades.
-Not Equal
-Main idea ? sentence a
- Relationship :reason
- Combined sentence: The grading system at our college should be abolished because it does not like to instructors and students
6. (a) Education in a free society teaches children how to think.(b)Education in a dictatorship
teaches children what to think
-Equal
- Main idea? both
- Relationship: opposite idea
-Combined sentence: Education in a free society teaches children how to think, but education
in a dictatorship teaches children what to think

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